thank you very much! I learned a lot from your correction, and I will keep going~ :)

yesterday Recently, my iPhone‘s battery life has been getting worse, so yesterday I went to the Apple Store in Nanjing Road, Shanghai, for a battery replacement. I was thinking that it would only take 2 or 3 hours to replace the battery, however to my surprise, the staff (stuff - things. staff - people who work for a company) told me to pick up my iPhone after 8pm, when I got there at 1pm. Oh my god! So, I spent 7 hours downtown, by myself, without any electronic devices. To be frank, I felt a little worried, because I was alone, and I had to keep asking strangers to ask what time it was. Luckily, I took some cash with me. Otherwise, I would have starved! The frequency of people using cash in the big cities of China is becoming lower and lower. While waiting for the completion of the repair, I went to a museum and visited an exhibition of the Pathway to American Contemporary Art (1865--1945), which was jointly sponsored by the Art Institute of Chicago, the Terra Foundation for American Art and the Shanghai Museum.There were so many fascinating paintings and pieces of art displayed in the hall, and I was totally enchanted by the beautiful colors and sophisticated brush strokes, that I was reluctant to as much as take a step. James McNeill Whistler and John Singer Sargent are both well-known artists, and I never dreamed I would have an opportunity to appreciate their master-pieces so closely, all in one day! Moreover, ("besides" is not used incorrectly here, however "moreover" is more suiting) through this exhibition, I got to know another excellent painter by the name of Edward Hopper, whose “Nighthawks” was my favorite painting in that exhibition. All in all, despite the physical exhaustion, I still felt very spiritually fulfilled. This was very captivating to read! A really cool story, well written too :)

It's good to put away our cellphones sometimes and discover unlimited beauties of the universe !