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Japanese cute milk candy The Fujiya milky is chewy milk candy. It's mainly made of fresh cream and sweetened condensed milk. Peko chan, the mascot character of Fujiya is very popular in Japan and has a vast amount of merchandise. I love its adorable package! For more art, check out my instagram page. www.instagram.com/meguislearning/ @meguislearning

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Japanese cute milk candy

The Fujiya Milky is chewy milk candy. It's mainly made of fresh cream and sweetened condensed milk. Peko chan, the mascot character of Fujiya, is very popular in Japan and has a vast amount of merchandise.
I love its adorable package!

For more art, check out my instagram page.
www.instagram.com/meguislearning/
@meguislearning

Adorable drawing! Are they like caramels?
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Oh, It seems I've been misunderstanding the meaning of the word "package"! Thanks for your kindness! It was very helpful.
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The grammar here is correct :) The only thing I would change to make it more natural is to use 'packet' or 'packaging' instead of 'package'. 'Packaging' refers to anything a product is wrapped in, a 'packet' is specifically the packaging of one product e.g. a packet of crisps or a packet of Fujiya milky. When I hear 'package' I think more of something received in the post like a parcel which needs to be opened up to see what is inside.

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