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How do we proceed Asia's got talent. I discussed the matter "How do we proceed AGT" with Go ueki and Aichi last night. They are famous dancers all of the world. There were many opinion in our discussion. In conclusion, Fusion of creativity of us and physical ability of them is all we need to win. Why don't we get the prize money 1million dollers?.

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How do we proceed to Asia's Got Talent.

I discussed the matter of "How do we proceed AGT" with Go Ueki and Aichi last night.
They are world famous dancers all of the world.
There were many opinions in our discussion.
In conclusion*,
Our fusion of creativity of us and physical ability of them ** is all we need to win.
Why don't we get the prize money of 1 million dollars?

* Instead of "In conclusion" you could say "In the long run we agreed . . ." or "In the end, we decided . . ." (I just learned the expression 結局 yesterday in a book). 

** Or, if it sounds better, you can say "the fusion of our creativity and their physical ability is all we need . . ."

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