Chinese version: 作为一个非汉语母语者，你能写出这样的汉语确实不错，整体上语法没有错误，但是逻辑上最后一句意义不太明确，因为你这个人称让人不知所云，即使你把它翻译成英语也是不容易理解，至少我作为一个汉语母语者也感到难以理解。 English version: As a non-native Chinese speaker, it's really good for you to be able to write such Chinese. Generally, there are no grammar mistakes, but logically the last sentence is not very clear. Because the use of the personal pronoun "你" makes it confusing. Even if you translate it into English, it's not easy to understand. At least, as a native Chinese speaker, I also find it hard to understand. 你写的这些汉语本身语法没有问题，相当不错。