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Today after school, my friend and I went shopping for birthday presents for two of our friends. Since they have different styles, it took us a long time to choose the gifts, and it was a little difficult. But we were able to find presents that we think they will like. We still have some money left in our budget, so our other friends will buy a few more small gifts. After shopping, we got a little hungry, so we went to a Korean food shop in Yokohama VIVRE and ate cheese hot dogs. I do not eat them very often, so I was really happy to have one again. Tomorrow I do not have second or third period classes, so I am going to go shopping for some clothes in the morning. After that, I will go to school for only my fourth period class, and then I have my part-time job. Tomorrow will be a little different from my usual day, so I am looking forward to it. I also feel like my hearing is getting better than yesterday because of the medicine. I hope it keeps improving and gets completely better soon.

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Today after school, my friend and I went shopping for birthday presents for two of our friends. Since they have different styles, it took us a long time to choose the gifts, and it was a little difficult. However, we were able to find presents that we think they will like. We still have some money left in our budget, so our other friends will buy a few more small gifts. After shopping, we got a little hungry, so we went to a Korean food shop in Yokohama VIVRE and ate cheese hot dogs. I do not eat them very often, so I was really happy to have one again. Tomorrow, I do not have second- or third-period classes, so I am going to go shopping for some clothes in the morning. After that, I will go to school for only my fourth-period class, and then I have my part-time job. Tomorrow will be a little different from my usual day, so I am looking forward to it. I also feel like my hearing is getting better compared with yesterday because of the medicine. I hope it continues improving and gets completely better soon.
Level: C1. Your writing is excellent. You describe a long and detailed day clearly, using a wide range of vocabulary and connecting your ideas naturally. Your ability to explain events, feelings, and future plans is very strong. Only minor adjustments to punctuation, compound adjectives, and natural expressions were needed. Keep up the excellent work! 😊

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