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The next day, we went to Hong Kong Disneyland. My friend likes rides, so we went to on a many attractions. But I wanted to buy souvenirs. She wanted to keep riding attractions until the park closed, but I was tired of following her, so I went to buy souvenirs by myself. Spending time with her at Disneyland was very stressful.
17 de jul de 2026 13:23
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The next day, we went to Hong Kong Disneyland. My friend likes rides, so we went on many attractions. However, I wanted to buy souvenirs. She wanted to keep going on rides until the park closed, but I was tired of following her, so I went to buy souvenirs by myself. Spending time with her at Disneyland was very stressful.
Level: B2+/C1.
Your writing is clear and expressive. You can describe events in order and explain your feelings well. Your vocabulary is developing strongly, especially when talking about personal experiences. To reach a more confident C1 level, continue focusing on fixed expressions, prepositions, and natural word combinations. Good work! 😊
17 de jul de 2026 15:08
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Rinka
Habilidades linguísticas
Inglês, Japonês
Idioma de aprendizado
Inglês
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