Today, I went to Shibuya with my friends after school. We ate some delicious food and enjoyed shopping together. I bought a few small things and had a great time talking with my friends. However, beca

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Today, I went to Shibuya with my friends after school. We ate some delicious food and enjoyed shopping together. I bought a few small things and had a great time talking with my friends. However, because it was Saturday, Shibuya was very crowded. There were so many people that I felt tired by the time I got home.

18 de jul de 2026 14:48

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Today, I went to Shibuya with my friends after school. We ate some delicious food and enjoyed shopping together. I bought a few small things and had a great time chatting with my friends. However, because it was Saturday, Shibuya was very crowded. There were so many people that I felt tired by the time I got home.

Level: C1. Your writing is fluent, natural, and well organised. You describe your experience clearly and use appropriate vocabulary for a daily-life situation. Your grammar is accurate, and your sentences flow smoothly. Only a very small vocabulary adjustment was needed to make it sound even more natural. Excellent work! 😊

18 de jul de 2026 21:46

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