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Yesterday, my part-time job in Shibuya was very hard. A group of 47 people came at 9 p.m., and they gave us a hard time for three hours. Groups also come to my part-time job in Yokohama, and they are difficult too. But going all the way to Shibuya, working in an unfamiliar place, and giving instructions to new workers was very hard.
However, even though the group was there, I did not make any mistakes with the bill and I was able to handle the register properly. I want to praise myself for that.
Today, my mom and dad are coming to Tokyo, and we are going to see Disney On Ice together. To be honest, I do not really know what it is, but I am a little excited because it is my first time seeing it. But honestly, I am more excited about having lunch in Tokyo before that.
I heard that two people are missing from today’s shift at my part-time job. I wish I could have worked today.
19 de jul de 2026 01:15
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Yesterday, my part-time job in Shibuya was very challenging. A group of 47 people arrived at 9:00 p.m., and they kept us busy for three hours. Large groups also come to my part-time job in Yokohama, and they can be difficult to deal with as well. However, travelling all the way to Shibuya, working in an unfamiliar place, and giving instructions to new staff members was especially challenging.
Even so, despite the large group, I didn’t make any mistakes with the bill, and I handled the till properly. I’m proud of myself for that.
Today, my mum and dad are coming to Tokyo, and we’re going to see "Disney On Ice" together. To be honest, I don’t really know what to expect, but I’m a little excited because it will be my first time seeing it. However, I’m actually even more excited about having lunch in Tokyo beforehand.
I heard that two people are missing from today’s shift at my part-time job. I wish I could have worked today.
Level: C1.
This is an excellent piece of writing. Your ideas are well organised, your grammar is consistently accurate, and you tell the story in a very engaging way. The only improvements involved more idiomatic vocabulary and a few British English word choices. Your ability to express both facts and emotions is very strong. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
19 de jul de 2026 09:27
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Habilidades linguísticas
Inglês, Japonês
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