Nowadays everybody is thinking about buying things, especially material items/possessions. stuff. I think we are worried about giving others the best gifts instead of spending time with them, which is actually what they need. It's true we are living stressful lives, everything goes by so fast/is going fast and we don’t have enough time to stay calm and enjoy the moment. Rather than buying toys for our children, it could be a great option to have an experience together, such as going to the cinema, to the theatre or travelling, spending quality time together. But honestly, in my opinion, the best gift you can give them is to invest in their studies and support them. Well done Jaime. Nicely written. Hope my changes help. And it’s also very true what you wrote