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I will talk about my part time job. I’m working at donut shop. I can eat one donut during my break. I like donuts but I don’t like crowded. The shop is always crowded on weekends. I feel very tired and I don’t want to work on weekends. Next, I’m working at after childcare facilities.I like to take care of children so I enjoy working. I have some friends who are elementary school students. They are really cute and unique. I sometimes go on excursions with the children, such as aquariums and trampoline parks. In addition, I’m working at restaurant. I'm not good at customer service. So I'm not interested in that part-time job. However, this is the job I’ve had the longest , and I have been working for a year.
If I were to start a new part-time job, I would like to work at a pet shop. Because I have a dog and like to take care of it. I also love puppies very much.
21 de out de 2025 05:37
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sorry LOL I missed these last two lines! :-)
If I were to start a new part-time job, I would like to work at a pet shop, because I have a dog and like taking care of it. I also love puppies very much.
21 de out de 2025 11:12
I would like to talk about my part time job. I work at a donut shop. I can eat one donut during my break. I like the donuts but I don’t like crowds. The shop is always crowded on weekends. I feel very tired and I don’t want to work on weekends. Also, I work at a childcare facility. I like to take care of children so I enjoy working there. I have some friends who are elementary school students. They are really cute. I sometimes go on excursions with the children, such as to aquariums and trampoline parks. In addition, I work at a restaurant. I'm not good at customer service, so I'm not interested in that part-time job. However, it is the job I’ve had the longest , and I have been working there for a year.
your English is very clear, I just tidied up your grammar. Great work :-)
If I were to start a new part-time job, I would like to work at a pet shop. Because I have a dog and like to take care of it. I also love puppies very much.
21 de out de 2025 11:09
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