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Is it OK to say ' I would be greatful...
Hi, I need help. Please review the following sentence for me. Thank you! In business email, is it OK to say ' I would be grateful for the opportunity to have a cooperation with you' ? I wanna use this expression because I saw sentences like ' I would be grateful for an opportunity to work! ' and ' I would be grateful to have the opportunity to have an interview with you. ' before.
23 de abr de 2012 08:57
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Correct: I would be grateful for the oppurtunity to do business with you.
Correct: I would be grateful for the chance to do business with you.
23 de abril de 2012
"I would be grateful for the opportunity to cooperate with you." "Cooperation", as a noun, is uncountable. It's better in this case to use the verb.
Also, please stop using "wanna". It's simply poor English. There's no reason to present yourself as a poor English speaker.
23 de abril de 2012
"It would be grateful for me to take the opportunity to have a cooperation with you."
I think this correction will make your statement more presentable, but you may ask also for a help to other people out here for second opinion. thank you!
23 de abril de 2012
I use Longman Dictionary to improve my vocabulary.
In longman, for 'wanna' it says as below,
wanna
wan·na /ˈwɔnə US ˈwɑː-/
a short form of 'want to' or 'want a', used in writing to show how people sound when they speak
I did not realize that wanna is sign of poor English before you told me. Thank you for your advice!
23 de abril de 2012
You wanna?
23 de abril de 2012
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Chinês (Mandarim), Inglês
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Inglês
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