Refine my essay
Hi there,
Recently I wrote an English essay to apply scholarships in order to fund my studies in the UK,
I really hope that I can receive the scholarships since studying abroad has always been my dream.
So I am wondering if there is anyone willing to help me refine my essay to make it more persuasive and attractive.
Please contact me if you are willing to help, I will greatly appreciate it!
Thank you very much!!! =)