Once a very remote soul Came across on the way, smiling while enjoying a couple of days. (this changes the tense...starting with "Once..." makes this past tense, so using gerunds alters it a bit in this case) Though time may tear us apart eventually, My best wishes are always here to stay

Once a very remote soul Came across on the way, smiling while enjoying a couple of days. Though time may tear us apart eventually, My best wishes are always here to stay Alternatively, Once a very remote soul that I came across along the way, smiling while we enjoyed a couple of days. Though time may tear us apart eventually, My best wishes will always be here to stay

Once a very remote soul Came across on the way, smiling while enjoy a couple of days. Though time may tears us apart eventually, My best wishes are always here to stay You need to put it in the form of a poem, pay attention to grammar and verb - noun agreement.