Hamza
please, correct this phrase ? there are the times where we feel it's the end, then we discover it's the start, and there are the doors where we feel it' shut, then we discover it's the real gateway
2 de set de 2015 00:22
Respostas · 8
As Peachey said- capitalise it, and check the punctuation. I think it would be better as two sentences. You should take out the first 'the's (of each phrase) - 'times' and 'doors' are not specific. And as I said - 'feel' does not really go with 'shut'. You can see if a door is shut or not. Have a think about other analogies that might fit?
2 de setembro de 2015
e.g. your analogy suggests using 'feel' a door is shut, but that doesn't really make sense. The more obvious word is 'think'.
2 de setembro de 2015
Corrections-wise, Peachey is correct. Mostly it is fine other than that. But there are a few odd word choices - which are more personal preference.
2 de setembro de 2015
Check the punctuation and capital letters. These are important.
2 de setembro de 2015
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