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Dear Mark,
Thanks for your letter. It was lovely to hear from you. Sorry I haven’t written for so long, I was busy with my project. It’s a pity but I can’t go and stay on your farm in the summer as I’m going to the country to help my grandparents.
You know, I moved to a new house six months ago and at first it seemed hard for me to get used to my new surroundings but now everything’s fine. I’ve made friends with lots of people and I like almost all the teachers at school.
I usually get up at 7:15 a.m., take a shower, get dressed and have breakfast. After that I go to school and try to get my head round some new things. At home I get ready for school, spend a lot of time on my English and then I hang out with my friends.
Anyway, I must go, as I promised to help my Mom. Can’t wait to hear from you.
All the best
Tatiana
6 de fev de 2016 17:48
Respostas · 7
It is well written , the style is neat and simple .
I can't detect mistakes except for " get my head Around instead of round " .
Good luck , keep it up :)
6 de fevereiro de 2016
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