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Bake Sale was an activity created in order to fundraise for the group. The main objective was to continue planning low cost activities for those interested in participate.
Desserts were made by some of the group members, having as result strengthening of friendship and teamwork.
It took place at Civil and Environmental Engineering Building. The offered deserts were:
• Orange cake
• Chocolate cake
• Lemon cake
• Strawberries with melted chocolate
The charisma and willingness of the group members allowed the event to develop in the best way. As result, people liked all the products and everything was sold out. The profit obtained was $ 110 USD.
15 de jun de 2016 02:48
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The Bake Sale was an activity created in order to fundraise for the group. The main objective was to continue planning low cost activities for those interested in participating.
Desserts were made by some of the group members, resulting in the strengthening of friendship through teamwork.
It took place at the Civil and Environmental Engineering Building. The offered deserts were:
• Orange cake
• Chocolate cake
• Lemon cake
• Strawberries with melted chocolate
The charisma and willingness of the group members allowed the event to develop in the best way (this sounds slightly awkward, but i see no grammatical errors with it). As result, people liked all the products and everything was sold out. The profit obtained was $ 110 USD.
15 de junho de 2016
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Habilidades linguísticas
Chinês (Mandarim), Inglês, Italiano, Português, Espanhol
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Chinês (Mandarim), Inglês
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