Working in different companies definitely widely broadens their views and experiences
Hi there, could you please help to correct grammatically this sentence?

1) Working in different companies definitely widely broadens their views and experiences, but I believe that it is not *necessarily(absolutely)* to increase the depth of the same field of the work.

2) I believe that it doesn't absolutely increase the depth of the same field of the work.

Thank you so much for your help!

Question

Working in different companies definitely widely broadens their views and experiences
Hi there, could you please help to correct grammatically this sentence?

1) Working in different companies definitely widely broadens their views and experiences, but I believe that it is not *necessarily(absolutely)* to increase the depth of the same field of the work.

2) I believe that it doesn't absolutely increase the depth of the same field of the work.

Thank you so much for your help!

Answer

Hello, I think this is what you are trying to say:

Working in different companies definitely broadens their views and experiences, but I believe that it does not necessarily deepen their knowledge of the field.

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