Help me to correct (Passive voice)
Could you please correct these passive voice sentences below?. Do they make sense?.
1].
To conclude, I strongly believe that job satisfaction is more beneficial than high salary
To conclude, it is strongly believed that job satisfaction is more beneficial than high salary
2].
First of all, I believe that job satisfaction gives people a sense of fulfillment that no money can guarantee.
First of all, it is thought that job satisfaction gives people a sense of fulfillment that no money can guarantee.
First of all, it is considered that job satisfaction gives people a sense of fulfillment that no money can guarantee.