每天早上我在学校学习

Thanks a lot! xiexie!

每天早上我都在学校学习,但是每天晚上和周末我都有一点时间, 每个行医和星期四我(都 or 经常)会去跳舞,我会跳舞而且跳得很好 周末我爱运动运动, 我最喜欢游泳和跑步 我游泳游得很快,跑步跑得也很快 星期天晚上我喜欢跟朋友一起出去玩 In Chinese, we usually say things in this structure: " time, subject,location,action(when,who, where,what) " . Ex: 每天早上(when), 我(who), 都(since you said every-morning in the beginning, you need a '都' here),在学校(where),学习(what), 但是(conjunction) 每天晚上和周末(when),我(who), 都(clarifying you have leisure time in both every night and weekend), 有时间(what) sometimes, you can switch the subject and the time EX:我(who),每天早上(when)都(clarifying frequency)在学校(where)学习(what). This sentence sounds better!

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