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Task 2 question: Technology】*
It is inevitable that as technology develops so traditional culture must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible – you can not have both together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? And give your own reasons.
[Agree] In some parts of our lives, technology has replaced our traditional style.
●T-shirts replaced our traditional clothes in terms of cost-effectiveness and efficiency
Firstly, in the contemporary era, traditional clothing is rarely chosen for everyday wear. Crafting authentic traditional garments involves a significant investment of time and money compared to the mass production of items like T-shirts. This cost-effectiveness and functionality contribute to a noticeable trend where people are leaning towards universal products and gradually moving away from traditional attire.
●Change of lifestyle as technology advanced.
Additionally, with the development of technology, lifestyles have changed. When visiting a mall, one can buy a variety of foods imported from other countries, facilitated by advanced transportation systems, and produced on a large scale as processed foods in factories. Authentic traditional foods are now reserved for specific occasions, dependent on seasons, due to the demands of our modern lifestyle.
[Disagree] On the other hand, technology has the potential to both preserve and enrich traditional cultures.
● Preservation
Technology can serve as a powerful tool for the preservation of traditional culture. Digital platforms, for example, allow communities to share and showcase their cultural heritage to a global audience. Virtual museums, online archives, and multimedia presentations enable the documentation and dissemination of traditional practices, preventing them from fading into obscurity.
● Enrich and fusion
Furthermore, technology can enhance traditional practices rather than replace them. For instance, advancements in virtual reality can offer immersive ex
3 de fev de 2024 12:18
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Task 2 question: Technology】* It is inevitable that as technology develops so
traditional culture must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible –
you can not have both together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with
this statement? And give your own reasons. [Agree] In some parts of our lives,
technology has replaced our traditional style. ●T-shirts replaced our
traditional clothes in terms of cost-effectiveness and efficiency Firstly, in
the contemporary era, traditional clothing is rarely chosen for everyday wear.
Crafting authentic traditional garments involves a significant investment of
time and money compared to the mass production of items like T-shirts. This
cost-effectiveness and functionality contribute to a noticeable trend where
people are leaning towards universal products and gradually moving away from
traditional attire. ●Change of lifestyle as technology advanced. Additionally,
with the development of technology, lifestyles have changed. When visiting a
mall, one can buy a variety of foods imported from other countries, facilitated
by advanced transportation systems, and produced on a large scale as processed
foods in factories. Authentic traditional foods are now reserved for specific
occasions, dependent on seasons, due to the demands of our modern lifestyle.
[Disagree] On the other hand, technology has the potential to both preserve and
enrich traditional cultures. ● Preservation Technology can serve as a powerful
tool for the preservation of traditional culture. Digital platforms, for
example, allow communities to share and showcase their cultural heritage to a
global audience. Virtual museums, online archives, and multimedia presentations
enable the documentation and dissemination of traditional practices, preventing
them from fading into obscurity. ● Enrich and fusion Furthermore, technology can
enhance traditional practices rather than replace them. For instance,
advancements in virtual reality can offer immersive ex
Rewrite this as a normal essay. It means you use fewer words and is easier to correct. The same goes for your other essays.
3 de fevereiro de 2024
Task 2 question: Technology】* It is inevitable that as technology develops so
traditional culture must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible –
you can not have both together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with
this statement? And give your reasons. [Agree] In some parts of our lives,
technology has replaced our traditional style. ●T-shirts replaced our
traditional clothes in terms of cost-effectiveness and efficiency. First, in
the contemporary era, traditional clothing is rarely chosen for everyday wear.
Crafting authentic traditional garments involves a significant investment of
time and money compared to the mass production of items like T-shirts. This
cost-effectiveness and functionality contribute to a noticeable trend where
people are leaning towards universal products and gradually moving away from
traditional attire. ●Change of lifestyle as technology advanced. Additionally,
with the development of technology, lifestyles have changed. When visiting a
mall, one can buy a variety of foods imported from other countries, facilitated
by advanced transportation systems, and produced on a large scale as processed
foods in factories. Authentic traditional foods are now reserved for specific
occasions, dependent on seasons, due to the demands of our modern lifestyle.
[Disagree] On the other hand, technology has the potential to both preserve and
enrich traditional cultures. ● Preservation technology can serve as a powerful
tool for the preservation of traditional culture. Digital platforms, for
example, allow communities to share and showcase their cultural heritage to a
global audience. Virtual museums, online archives, and multimedia presentations
enable the documentation and dissemination of traditional practices, preventing
them from fading into obscurity. ● Enrich and fusion Furthermore, technology can
enhance traditional practices rather than replace them. For instance,
advancements in virtual reality can offer immersive ex
3 de fevereiro de 2024
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Inglês, Japonês
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