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Natto, which is a traditional Japanese food made from soybeans,is essential for me to stay healthy.Natto is high in protein and contains Isoflavones. Isoflavones have the same effect as female hormones. So I think natto is good for my skin and hair. That’s why I eat natto two or three times a week.
21 de fev de 2022 12:18
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Natto is a traditional Japanese food made from soybeans and is essential for me to stay healthy.
Natto is high in protein and contains isoflavones, which have the same effect on the body as female hormones.
So I think natto is also good for my skin and hair. That’s why I eat natto two or three times a week.
This is nice writing, but I think you’ve left out some key information! I imagine the reader would like to know what natto looks and tastes like, and how you eat it! Do you eat natto in a sandwich? As a pizza topping? In soup? Do you like it? Your English is great, all you need is one more sentence to be perfect!
22 de fevereiro de 2022
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Natto, which is a traditional Japanese food, is made from soybeans and is essential for me to stay healthy.Natto is high in protein and contains Isoflavones. Isoflavones have the same effect as female hormones. So I think natto is good for my skin and hair. That’s why I eat natto two or three times a week.
21 de fevereiro de 2022
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