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Ellie
Losing weight is a lifelong career for girls.
Although it is a little exaggerated, it is indeed an undeniable fact for me at present, especially the information I saw this morning, which makes me have a special sense of urgency to lose weight.
Excellent people are self-disciplined, I want to act! Reduce staple food intake, control the amount of dinner, come on!
I can do it!
16 de abr de 2024 03:22
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Losing weight is a lifelong career for girls. Although it is a little
exaggerated, it is indeed an undeniable fact for me at present, especially the
information I saw this morning, which makes me have a special sense of urgency
to lose weight. Excellent people are self-disciplined, I want to act! Reduce
staple food intake, control the amount of dinner, come on! I can do it!
Hi Ellie,
What an interesting topic! You wrote it well.
Some corrections
Especially reading/watching/considering (verb required) the information I saw this morning
Makes me have a special sense- it's not wrong but feel a sense of urgency would sound more natural.
Control the amount of dinner I eat.
Just a comment on the topic. Looking after yourself is a good and healthy thing to do but your health is so important. Please don't diet so much that your health suffers.
Take care
Sian
16 de abril de 2024
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Ellie
Habilidades linguísticas
Chinês (Mandarim), Inglês
Idioma de aprendizado
Inglês
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