Sofia
Hello every one, Can we correct the test below? I’m Internal Sales in a Banck. Leasing is my Business. I work with four external Sales. They recherce new opportunities of business, and I management the operations process. In my job is important balance business and regulation’s banck. I start my work at alf past eight. My first attivity is reading the email. Then I wrhiting email to clients or supplire. Every day I do different meating with others Offices of my banck, the topic is regular the Operations Process. Often I do call with clients and supplier for new business opprptunity. I like my job beacause in challenging. I dislike for the complex banking regulation. Thanks for the attentions,have a good day!
22 de abr de 2024 17:48
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I work in the Internal Sales in a Bank. Leasing is my Business. I work with four external sales. They create new opportunities of business, and I manage the operations process. It is important in my job to balance business and regulation’s bank. I start my work at half past eight. My first activity is reading the email. Then I write email to clients or supplier. Every day I do different meetings with other offices of my bank regarding the regular topic of Operations Process. Often I do call with clients and supplier for new business opportunity. I like my job beacause it’s challenging. I dislike it because of the complex banking regulation. Thanks for the attention,have a good day!
22 de abril de 2024
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Hello every one, Can we correct the test below? I’m Internal Sales in a Banck. Leasing is my Business. I work with four external Sales. They recherce new opportunities of business, and I management the operations process. In my job is important balance business and regulation’s banck. I start my work at alf past eight. My first attivity is reading the email. Then I wrhiting email to clients or supplire. Every day I do different meating with others Offices of my banck, the topic is regular the Operations Process. Often I do call with clients and supplier for new business opprptunity. I like my job beacause in challenging. I dislike for the complex banking regulation. Thanks for the attentions,have a good day!
Hi Sofia Nice text! I'm in internal sales in a bank. They find/ research new opportunities for business and regulations of the bank. I manage the operations process. İt's important in my job to balance the business and the regulations of the bank. I start work at half past eight. My first task is reading my emails. Then I write emails to clients or suppliers. Every day I have different meetings with other offices in the bank. Usually the topic of meetings is the operations process. I often call clients and supplies for new business opportunities. I like my job because it's challenging but I dislike the complex banking regulations. Thanks for your time. Have a good day!
22 de abril de 2024
Hello every one, Can we correct the test below? I work in internal sales in a bank. Leasing is my business. I work with four external sales (clients?). They research new business opportunities, and I management the operations process. In my job it is important to balance business and bank regulations. I start my work at half past eight. My first activity is reading email. Then I write email to clients or suppliers. Every day I have/attend/go to different meetings with others offices of my bank, about the regular the operations process. Often I do calls with clients and suppliers for new business opportunities. I like my job beacause it is challenging. I dislike dealing with the complex banking regulations. Thanks for the attention, have a good day!
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23 de abril de 2024
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