I'm not sure what you meant with the "disinterested" sentence, but in this case it sounded like you were not interested in her, (which doesn't make sense because you were interested in her). "I would see here there" and "I used to pick flowers" refer to things that happened more than once. If you only picked flowers once, then you would say, "One time, I picked flowers." (Simple past) On the Internet we often write "cause" instead of "because" but it is incorrect. We do that because we're lazy. 🙂 Great job! 👍