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Ksenia Sobol
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I always wanted a cat. When I was a child I have got a cat. The cat called Kuzya. He was black with a white neck and paws. He lived with us 3 or 5 years. I don’t know what happened but he was taken away to my grandma. He didn’t want to live there and one day he left. I cried and cried, but he didn’t come back.
My second cat is Keks, calls like pie if it translates in English. He is black and white, beautiful! I love him. He is four years old. He was born on Christmas. We took him to home from an animal shelter. Everybody love him so much!
14 de ago de 2023 16:12
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Hello Ksenia.
Great job with this! I've included a corrected version below:
I always wanted a cat. When I was a child I got a cat. The cat was called Kuzya. He was black with a white neck and paws. He lived with us for 3 or 5 years. I don't know what happened, but he was taken to my grandma. He didn't want to live there, and one day he left. I cried and cried, but he didn't come back.
My second cat is Keks, or "pie" if translated into English. He is black and white, beautiful! I love him. He is four years old. He was born on Christmas. We took him home from an animal shelter. Everybody loves him so much!
Let me know if you have any questions!
14 de agosto de 2023
hi
15 de agosto de 2023
Este conteúdo viola nossas Diretrizes da Comunidade.
15 de agosto de 2023
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Ksenia Sobol
Habilidades linguísticas
Inglês, Russo
Idioma de aprendizado
Inglês
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