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Please help me correct the wrong sentence !!
Hello
I'm a big fan of the movie The Notebook
I'm promoting The Notebook through a YouTube video.
So I used my own narration and subtitles to produce and promote the video.
This is fair use.
In fact, I'm very happy to see that many people watched my video and then commented on the purchase and re-watching of the movie through the VOD service in Korea.
I want to grow into the biggest YouTuber in Korea through your movies, and I hope more people buy and watch your movies that I review.
Since I uploaded your movie The Notebook to YouTube, many people who watched my video praised your movie The Notebook.
For example, your movie (The Notebook) is the best movie of my life.
I'm going to watch YouTube reviews and watch VOD.
I want this movie to be well received by more people.
And I hope people who have watched your movie become fans of your movie like me.
Your positive choice will benefit you and me.
Thank you.
(And if you later give me a chance to make your movie before it's released in Korea, I want to help you promote the movie by making the best YouTube video)
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Is this sentence right?
Is this sentence right?
I'm not sure whether this sentence is right or not because i just heard like this from my teacher on web
"A passive is a verb or sentence which has as a subject the person or thing to which in action is being done."
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I need someone
I need someone who can teach me english on skype everyday.
And then i can teach you korean too.
If you wanna learn korean and teach me english, dont hesitate to cantack me~
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Today is my last day for the company.
Did i write this correctly ?
Today is my last day for the company.
I used to work in Business planning department but these days the company is going through hard time so I had to move to another department a week ago.
But I don’t want to work as a noobie in new department so I quit my job today.
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I need someone who can help me.
I should write a resume to get new job.
Are these sentences for my resume right ?
1. Job Experience
-Sensitivty Analysis of Financial Model for the Efficient Bussiness Strategy of BOT Project
- Writing an investment proposal for selling a solar power plant.
- Reporting and analyzing Sales performance.
- Reporting and analyzing Income performance.
- Analysis for maket and competitor.
- Set-up value added planning and the monitoring the core strategy.
- Writing a business plan with task force member for M&A.
2. Self-Introduction
Hello,
My name is Min.
I double majored in Mathematics and Bussiness at ABC University located in Seoul.
I used to work in the department of Business Planning in the IT company called ABC.
I am a strong worker and value commitment, and once I commit to something I finish what I have started.
I also, always have a positive attitude.
Hiring me for this part of your business will be helpful to your company.
I would really like to work for your company and will assure that your hiring of me will be advantagous to you.
Thank you for your time
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Althought we are on the dark road
Are these sentences correct ?
Althought we are on the dark road, we have the ramp lighting us toward our goal and future.
The ramp is our trust and beleive.
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I like a Phy who is a Korea singer.
Are these sentences right?
I like a Phy who is a Korea singer.
He is tall and looking fun also he is a singer. He songs and dances at the same time.
I have ever read about him on the newspaper. He was very hard because he normally doesn’t sing a song well. He never thought he would be famous singer in the world but he practiced and did his best every time. Finally he became to be famous singer in the world.
I like people who do their best for their goals and dreams.
That is him.
That is why I like him and he is my favorite singer !
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I have a key pal and her name is Jung
Are these sentences right?
I have a key pal and her name is Jung
She go to school named Hun and my friend hooped her up with me
I haven’t met her but I have a photo of her.
She is so beautiful on the photo. She has blond hair, blue eyes and white skin…
She said that she like dancing and going to swim pool when she has a time.
She will come to Korea next week with my invitation.
I will have a plan that I take her to some place which she wants to go.
I hope she like it.
I want to meet her in a hurry
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I wanted to be a great cooker.
are these sentences right ?
My mother was sick so I was cook because I think it was easy.
First I cut Kimchi and ham a little and I fried them with oil on frying fan for a while.
It will be finished after I fried it with a little rice and I put it on with some salt a dish.
It looked like good but I was disappointed after I ate it.
It was not delicious I thought.
In fact it tasted salt and hot.
My sister doesn’t like it but my father ate it all because his daughter first cooked.
I really wanted to be a great cooker, but unfortunately I am not.
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How can i improve my english?
Is this sentence right ?
I wanted to be good at English after I joined English camp.
I asked my English teacher the way how I can be good at English.
My teacher said that you follow this way.
First, you should talk English with your friend.
Second, you should hear a tape in English to improve your listening and pronounce.
Third, you should read a book in English to improve your vocabulary.
Finally, you should write your diary in English.
It gives you an opportunity to write some things in English.
It looks like very simple but I am not sure I can follow it all.
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