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Help translatin a story part2 Hello again, I couldn't upload the rest of the chapter, so he is the middle and final. Please comment and help me with the grammar and coherency. “Kari ...” Gatomon eyes shined after hears the Kari's words. “Patamon said me the same: I had to smile now and then because in this way I'd be ok. He supported me and helped to join to the grooup. Not for nothing "the hope" it's one of his attributes”. - Gatomon said smiling and remembering the wise words of his friend. “The Wizardmon's death is something that I never could get over. Sometimes I wish He was here, and tell me what I have to do. I know I count with you Kari, but really I miss him so much” - Again, the Gatomon's eye brightness gone, and started to drop tears. “You know Gatomon... I think Wizardmon would not like see you sad, and, there is a reason for all the things happen. Only the fate decides” Kari's voice turn into a serious tone. “If he had not died, would have died you or me. You can't fault yourself for the past. You said me you have a friend and you can count with him: Patamon” - Kari said with hope. “Yes! It's true. He is a cute and innocent digimon, and always concern about others. I can say the same about me, I'm very selfish. With him is different, I can be outgoing, even I dare to tell him some secrets. I try to pretend to be strong and courageous and not cry because I don't want playing victim, but it's inevitable with him. I don't like he watch me crying, but sometimes I relieve with him.” “Something similar happens with T.K.” Kari said laughing again and looking dreamy. “He always cares about me, and when I'm in troubles he knows what my problem is. We need of the people, someone that listen to us, Gatomon, I think you look in Patamon, something that Wizardmon had too.” “Quite so! Furthermore, you two care about me always”. Gatomon looked very happy. “It's funny to think when he digievolve to Angemon, is more serious than before, but I see that personality it's perfect for him.” Kari Commented- “And also he is very handsome, don't you think?” Kari cast a insinuating glance to Gatomon. “Tomorrow we'll go to the Digiword, I think we can stay a long time. Gatomon said avoiding the question.But I would like go in my "Ultra form" Kari. This way it will be easier and less tiring.” “Sure! It's a pity; T.K. and me we can go with you, but it's better this way” Kari Said Smirking. Gatomon's face looks like an anime face, just like (¬¬) And both of
2 de dezembro de 2013
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Help with translating a story Hello! It's the first time I try to "translate" a fanfic I'm writing, from Spanish to English. Can you help me commenting about if the grammar it's ok, and the words are correct? I'm new in writing stories in english. Also I want to know if it makes sense (The story) Thank you! :) Now I share with you the chapter 1: It’s 21:00, but in her mind it felt like 17:35 from 3 years ago. “Do you remember the first time we said goodbye?” A voice asked. “Yes I do” Another voice replied. “I was sad because I didn’t know if we would meet again” The voice continued. “After a long time, I asked myself about where that whistle was coming from.”? The female voice asked “Err… I…” The voice replied jittery. “Don’t worry” The female voice said and after she looked toward her. It doesn’t matter. “What did you do in that time?” The voice asked. Finally the identity was revealed: It was Kari. “I was Patamon” Gatomon replied. You know I just would met the others. “Why Patamon?” Kari asked eager. It’s easy to answer. Both of us digievolve into the same digimon type. Also you and T.K. were kids and the same age. His emblem is the hope and mines the light. It’s natural that we are good friends. But I wanted to talk with Angemon… Patamon is a little fool… Kari could not hide the little laugh, outing from her mouth. “Why is he fool” Kari Asked still laughing. “He is a Kid, sometimes immature, but he’s a good boy with good feelings. However, Angemon is serious, mature and thoughtful. In fact, sometimes I remember Wizardmon when I see him.” Gatomon Started to drop tears while she looked toward the sky through the window. “I’ve never felt that I’m part of the team Kari…” Gatomon expressed letdown. “Why you say that? All of us we are good friends” The girl attempted to liven up. “I’ve had problems from time ago. Sometimes I feign to look ok, but I’m not. My situation it’s hard. I don’t pretend playing the victim and that the people try to help me.” Gatomon said with a sad voice. “You know…” Kari interrupted “I understand what you mean. I don’t say to others all the things that happen to me, for not wanting worry them. I don’t care if it’s I don't care if I'm passing for a terrible situation; I try to hide it and always smile to the life. Sometimes this is the best can you do; even the solution to your problems. There is always a positive side in all our problems, even if they are very bad. I can't upload the rest, I'll do byparts
2 de dezembro de 2013
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My music Hi ;) I'm from Mexico and I'm a pianist and composer. I love learn languages, my favorites are Russian and Portuguese. I hope study in russia some day and visit Brazil. You can hear about my music on soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/micheliszt-camacho I gonna share you some of my original compositions, i hope you like it: https://soundcloud.com/micheliszt-camacho/ejercicio-cuarteto-quartet https://soundcloud.com/micheliszt-camacho/symphony-in-c-major-3-voices https://soundcloud.com/micheliszt-camacho/romanza-for-piano https://soundcloud.com/micheliszt-camacho/guitarra-composici-n2 https://soundcloud.com/micheliszt-camacho/preludio-para-guitarra-en-dm
26 de abril de 2013
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Este conteúdo viola nossas Diretrizes da Comunidade.31 de março de 2013
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Disfruta de una buena tarde de jazz

¡Hola amigos! Soy pianista y compositor y quisiera compartir con ustedes, esta composición que hice. "A good afternoon of jazz" Espero lo disfruten, se relajen un poco disfrutando de una buena taza de café por la tarde y escuchando esta pieza. 

Disfruten 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c5Q7P5W4UzM 

30 de março de 2013
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¿Qué canciones de bossa nova me recomiendan?

He escuchado a Jorge Ben, Sergio Ménde y otros pero, ¿Qué otro tipo de autores me recomendarían? Me encanta el bossa y la música clásica. :)

29 de março de 2013
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I'm looking for brazilian partners

Hello. I'm From Mexico and i'm learning portuguese, but my level is very very low. I'm a beginner. 

Can you help me. I can help you with your spanish hehe :) kisses.

29 de março de 2013
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I want to learn russian

I'm native spanish speaker wanting to learn russian.

I'm a beginner. we can make language exchange if you wnt

16 de janeiro de 2013
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Doing Conversations Я: Извините, Вы Понимаете по-англски? Она: Нет. Я: Вы понимаете по-испански? Она: Нет, я не понимаю по-испански! Я: Ааа! Вы понимаете по-русски!! Она: Да! Она: Вы Американец? Я: Нет. Она: Откуда вы? Я: Я из мексики. Она: Вы Понимаете по-русски? Я: Только Немного Она: Как вы поживаете? Я: Очень хорошо, спасибо. Она: До Свиданя!
15 de janeiro de 2013
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself я пианист Я говорю по русскйи (толька немного) Я из мексики
15 de janeiro de 2013
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