hi.I want to improve my writing.Can you help me? Hello everyone, I'm Kate. Now I'm going to introduce you a very famous person. It's Bill Gates. Bill Gates was born in 1955. He is an American business man, the founder of the biggest software company-Microsoft as well as one of the richest person in the world. To achieve his success, he had to pay for many things.When he was 20, he dropped out of Harvard University to work on a computer program with his friend. They worked 18 hours a day and 7 days a week. A few years later, they created a software company called Microsoft in 1975. Their company became very popular because there were a lot of useful software like Microsoft Word, Exel, Powerpoint... that help us a lots in our work. At the age of 34, he was the youngest billionaire in the history of the US. Although he was rich, he didn't forget his responsibility to community. He and his wife founded a giant charity fund called Gates and Amanda Foundation to help poor people and improve the condition of health care in the poor country. In conclusion, our student generation should study harder and try our best to achieve success to help many people. That's all my speaking.what do you think? If there's any mistake in here, please help me to fix it.thank you

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