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Periods of life
Hello!
Here is one of my latest essays as preparation for the IELTS General exam. I would be very grateful for some corrections and advices.
Thankfully, Alex.
Topic: Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Many people think that: every part of our life brings us different kind of experience, knowledge and satisfaction of living. Some people get more satisfaction from their teenage period and other like more their adult period.
From my point of view the teenage period has an important meaning for us. This is a time when people have some knowledge and experience and start to make their own decisions, although they are not fully responsible for their actions. The fact that makes this period difficult is that, we also should to select our future profession. In contrast, it is a great time when we fall in love first time and new feelings turn upside down our lives. In this period, as it seems, we have strong friendship and we believe that it will continue forever.
On the other hand the adult period is less romantic, but, from my standpoint it has its own benefits. This is a time of starting new families. I think, I will never forget these overwhelming feelings when I become a father. Since that time I am responsible not only for my own actions but for my family. In this period we reap the fruits of our labor for the first time and we are able to judge if the decision that we maid is right.
In conclusion, I would like to say, that each period of our life is different and has its own value. It depends on the particular person what period of life is his or her favorite. But, I think, the main point is that you should not regret about years that passed. Instead of this people should enjoy their present life.
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Car ownership restriction.
It is a well-known fact that number of cars increases each year. The amount of cars grows not only in general but also per average family. That is why discussions about restrictions of car’s ownership have became so popular today.
Some people believe that if we restrict the ownership of cars to one per family it would change our life to the better. In such a way we will reduce pollution and such problem as traffic congestion will be solved automatically. To some extent I agree with this point, but there is back side of the medal.
I think everybody agree with me that manufacturing of cars is great industry, which has significant influence on the global economics. If we made such restrictions we would have some benefits, but such doing would cause great troubles for us. Total amount of producing new cars will decrease automatically, and manufacturers will have to close some of factories. In such a way a lot of workers will lose their jobs and a government will lose great amount of taxes and it will not be able to pay allowance to these people. From my point of view these changes can lead global economics to the financial crisis.
In conclusion I would like to say that the increasing number of cars has some negative influence on our life. But, I believe that there are a lot of ways to manage with these problems, not only tough restrictions are allowed. The government can encourage manufacturers to develop technologies in order to reduce bad impact on the ecology and it can build new roads in order to solve the traffic problems.
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IELTS Task1 Writing. Letter to friends
Hello!
Here is one of my latest answers on IELTS Gen. task1.
I would be very happy to get corrections or advices.
Could you help me?
Thank you very much!!!
Topic:
Last month you stayed with some friends.
They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
-thank them for the photos and for the holidays
-explain why you did not write earlier
- invite them to come and stay with you
Answer:
Dear Ann and Bob!
Please, take my great thanks for your letter and for the photos that were attached.
These photos are great! They exceeded all my expectations. You with Bob are so beautiful here. I repeatedly looked back to our joint holiday and those memories brought me fine fettle each time. I would like to express my sincere thanks for that time we shared together.
Unfortunately, your letter dropped in the wrong box of my e-mail and I did not notice it. Then I was running an errand for my boss since 7-th to 17-th of August and left my city. So, I could not reply instantaneously. I am sorry for this delay.
By the way, I have interesting news. Sting will hold a concert in my city in the end of September. Precisely, it will take place on 25 of September. So, it would be great if you have some free time in this period. I will be very glad to see you in my house, and I assure you we will have best time. What do you think about this?
With love,
Alex.
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Looking for friends.
Hi!
My name is Alex.
I am from Mariupol, Ukraine. I came here with a hope to have an opportunity to practice my English with native speakers. I prepare for my next IELTS exam in August. I had one in January and got 5.5 grades, so I will try to get the better result. In this case speaking with native speakers will be very helpful for me. I can offer the same help in Russian or Ukrainian.
I will be glad to have communication via Skype or E-mail.
All the best, Alex.
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petrol prices
Hello!
Here is one of my latest essays for the IELTS General Task2.
I would be glad to get corrections and advises.
Thankfully, Alex.
Topic:
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
Answer:
Pollution and traffic problems are very actual for people today. The increasing number of cars has more and more influence on our ecology.
Some people think that we can manage with this problem by increasing the price of petrol. Partly, I agree with this idea, but such action will not solve the problem ultimately and will affect other aspects of our life. Higher level of petrol price will affect the logistics and prices of goods, transport taxes and other services will rise automatically. In this way we will not solve pollution problem, but also reduce our living standards.
Development of new types of motors and making them more accessible for people can help us. Electric and hybrid cars are more and more popular today, but they stay more expensive then conventional ones, and a lot of people can not afford them. The government help can be very useful. Take Japan, for example. I read the Toyota developed car that works on the water. In the nearest future it will be quite expensive, but their government offers to cover 15% of cost for customers and the interest free credit line. I think it will work, and people will be using this offer until the rising demand helps the industry to pull down prices. Such action will help people to change their conventional cars and solve the problem of pollution. To help make our roads be clearer, the government should popularize the use of bicycles. I think it will be very helpful; furthermore it works in many European countries, and there are not traffic problems even in small towns. Building of new roads also can be helpful with this problem.
To conclude, I want to say that problem solving today becomes more and more complicated. A hard limitation will not be such effective as providing of new technologies and motivation for change of lifestyle.
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