한개 달걀만 (my first Korean poem) Okay, there are soooo many mistakes here I know. But I really want to get this poem correct and post it to my creative writing blog. So I will be so happy if someone can help correct the mistakes (and also a couple questions in there). I hope it's not too bad :) 아주마는 기다리고있어, Ajuma is waiting, 점심 같이랑 기다리고있어, waiting with lunch, (for)제위는 배고파, lunch for my hungry stomach, 저는배고파! I am hungry! 아주 배고파. Very hungry. 단백쟐은 먹고싶어... I want protein... 그렇지만 단백쟐없어... But there is no protein... 없어!!! None!!! 밥만 있어, 그리고 There is only rice, and 국, 그리고 Soup, and 김치 kimchi - 김치는 항상 - kimchi is always (I want to say 'Kimchi is everlasting') 달랼. Egg 한개 달걀만 있어. There is only one egg. 단백쟐은 여섯개그램만. Only 6 grams of protein. (do I need to add '있어'? I don't really want to say 'there is...', it's poetic ;) ) 밥위에 단백쟐은 여섯개. 6 grams of protein on my rice. (again, does it make sense without '있어'?) 충분하지 않아, It's not enough, 게, 충분하지 않아. No, it's not enough. 저는배고파 아직도, I'm still hungry, 그리고 지금 안구에 습기있어... and now I have moisture in my eyes (this is a slang term, to suggesting I'm about to cry, right? Can I use it like this?)

무슨 / 뭐 - different use? I'm only a beginner and came across these two different uses of 'what' in a sentence (I know there are probably more as well...) 1) 이거 뭐에요? - The form I'm familiar with... 2) 무슨 책을 읽어요? - and the form I just came across and I'm not familiar with... Can anyone help clarify the why the different use? Thanks :)

저는 영국에서 온... Hi, I'm having a bit of trouble with a formal introduction. I want to tell the person (i.e. a new employer) my name and that I come from England, rather than just '영국사람 입니다'. So I wanted to use '영국에서 온..' after saying my name to say 'I come from England', but do I need to add something to 온 for the formality? Like '옵니다'? Sorry my level is still beginner and I'm just exploring different ways to introduce myself. Is something like this correct when meeting my new employer for the first time?: "안녕하세요? 저는 재이슨이 입니다 그리고 (I'm not sure this is the correct use of '그리고' to mean 'and') 영국에서 옵니다. 처음 뵙겠슴니다, 잘 부탁 드십니다." Thanks for any feedback :)Oh and I just thought... does using the verb '오다' in this context mean I 'come from' England as in I am 'from' England by nationality? Or does it just have the connotation that England is the last place I flew/travelled from? Sorry... so many questions about something so small!

저는 한극어 를 겅부해요... 안녕하세요! 처음 뵙겠슴니다, 처는 제이슨 이 에 요, 영어 성겡님 이 에 요. 메일 한극어 를 겅부헤요, 한극어 는 사람 만나 고앂어요 :)