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You Are Not Beautiful! (Translated From A Poem)
I try to translate a poem with the title "You are not beautiful!" composed by Dang Huan. I don't know about rules of English poems, so it's just in meaning.
Em ơi em chẳng đẹp đâu! / Hi, girl, you are not beautiful, really!
Không tin cứ lấy gương tầu mà soi. / Don’t believe it? Let look at a mirror.
Ừ thì có thắm làn môi./ Uhm, your lips just look rosy.
Ừ thì có lúm má cười đã sao? / Uhm, you have dimpled cheeks, but does it represent beauty?
Thông minh, trán tất nhiên cao. / With intelligence, your forehead is high of course.
Đã là con gái mắt nào chẳng xanh. / Being a girl, your eyes are like many girls’ blue ones.
Kể chi suối tóc mát lành. / Don’t be proud of your smooth long hair.
Cứ lười không cắt tóc anh cũng dài. / If I were too lazy to have my hair cut, it would be also as long as your hair.
Bảo em son phấn là sai. / Saying that you have made up is wrong.
Nhưng trời nắng đẹp má ai chẳng hồng. But your cheeks look ruddy, just because the beautiful sunshine makes them turn in red.
Chưa già tất phải trẻ trung. / Not getting old, you are certainly young.
Chị anh hồi sắp lấy chồng chả thua. My older sister when preparing getting married was also young.
Sao lại cười, rõ lạ chưa? Why do you smile? Does it sound weird?
Hay là em ngỡ anh đùa trêu nhau? Do you think I joke you?
Thật đấy mà, chẳng đẹp đâu! I’m not kidding, you are really not beautiful!
Can you correct my writing, please? Thank you very much.
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Find your love
I has just watched a short video about finding another love instead of unforgettable memories. It inspires me to share my feelings about author’s view. The link is below:
https://vimeo.com/106773731
This video encourages someone whose heart has broken by refusing from her boyfriend. The meaningful story implies that life is short, don’t be so sad and let find your own. Look around and open your heart to find out true love which sometimes in front of you but you didn’t recognize.
Love likes a beautiful and fragile flower. When a flower dies, it will leaves a seed which will grow a plant and blossom another beautiful flower. This is a new, romantic and logic view for me. I often hear when a door is shut, another door will open. In my opinion, these doors don’t show a persuasively causal principle compared to flower - seed relationship. The author looks a broken love by thankful views. Therefore, poor memories turn into wonderful experience for finding pleasant ones.
Please correct my writing. Thank you very much.
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A Wonderful train I’d had
I still remember the first train I went to my best friend’s house in the central of Vietnam.
Over fifteen years ago, my best friend invited me to come back her hometown for a summer holiday. I was so excited because it was not only the first time I travelled a long distance but also by train.
We departed at about 3PM at a local station. We bought economic tickets with sitting-chairs which meant we had been sitting on hard chairs over 15 hours. However, I was too eager to feel tired. I looked around curiously. There were many passengers in a cabin. While they were talking each other loudly, I was attracted by beautiful landscapes, which were villages, some alone cottages, various fields of fruits and of flowers, non-stop passing my eyes until we were served meals, which are for long distance routes only. At night, the noise of train seemed so louder that I couldn’t sleep.
In the early morning, after had breakfast, I glued my eyes over the window again. The nearer the central land, the more impressive landscape with many long sandy beaches, green hills, mountains and bay.
When the train ran through Hai Van hill, a spectacular scenery appeared with the zigzag railway running around mountains and abyss. Then, we passed Lang Co bay, where it is famous with pure nice beach, fresh sea food and peaceful resorts. It was really worth for me to get there some years later by car.
About one hour later, we arrived Hue, a romantic and ancient city with lots of temples and royal tombs where my friends picked me around in next day.
Although I sometimes go by trains, I still most impress the first wonderful train in my life.
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A Charity Trip to the Highland
I got stressful for a long time. So, I decided to set aside all my work last week to join a charity group who often annually visits abandoned children and old people in highland.
All participates came from different ages, professions and even nationalities including 21 members. We departed in the morning. The atmosphere got gradually warmer among the group, contrary to air outdoor, by stories and feelings shared by volunteers.
After midday, we stopped for lunch at a family restaurant. The restaurateur happily led us into their private rooms for our disguise. We wore in red clothes and played roles as Santa Claus and Mrs. Claus.
The first place we visited is a warm home, which rears abandoned children, managed by Sisters. When we stepped into the gate, lots of kids were running out to greet us. Some of them put their small hands forwards to us to seek our arms, making me so much miss my 2-year-old daughter. My tear suddenly dropped uncontrollably. They looked so lovely and poor. Kids were happily received gift, candy, and toys, then gathered around to see young volunteers who boisterously danced songs of Noel and Santa Claus. The head of our group gave fund to the owner to partly cover babies’ basic cost of living. Finally, we had to say goodbye for other places.
In next day, I left the group to return home for taking care my baby due to her sickness. Goodbye babies! One day, I will come back with my daughter.
Thanks for watching and correcting it if any. Wish you all a successful and happy New Year!
Oanh Le.
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