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The wedding day. Form the early morning the bride with one of hrr sisters go to the beaty salon whish they had already booked an appointment in. Weanwhile the bride's family get ready and prepare Arabic coffy to welcome the groom's family. On the other hand all the groom's family members and close friends gether in the groom's family house. Then they leave together to the bride's family house forming what we call Alfardeh and usually they beep (car beep) along the way. Once they arrive the bride's family house they are welcomed and offerd Arabic coffey. The sing some traditional songs and then the bride's grandfather, father, or ancle accompany her to a decorated car where she and the groom sit in the back seat while someone, usually a groom's brother or cousin drives them or the groom drives and the bride sit next to him.
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Please correct me
The wedding day. Form the early morning the bride with one of hrr sisters go to the beaty salon whish they had already booked an appointment in. Weanwhile the bride's family get ready and prepare Arabic coffy to welcome the groom's family. On the other hand all the groom's family members and close friends gether in the groom's family house. Then they leave together to the bride's family house forming what we call Alfardeh and usually they beep (car beep) along the way. Once they arrive the bride's family house they are welcomed and offerd Arabic coffey. The sing some traditional songs and then the bride's grandfather, father, or ancle accompany her to a decorated car where she and the groom sit in the back seat while someone, usually a groom's brother or cousin drives them or the groom drives and the bride sit next to him.
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Please correct me
There is no specific time for the
engagment period but it usually lasts one year.
After the engagment party the process of dating and getting to know each other begind. There are two official feasts(invite people to eat) held. First the groom's to be family invits the bride's to be family over lanch or dinner. Then the opposite happens; the bride's to be family invits the groom's to be family.
During this period the groom to be starts the house processing usually accompanied by the bride to be. They also buy (alshabka); it's part of the dawry and it's basically a set of gold or more ( or more than one set of gold).
The bride accompanied by her mother and sisters starts shopping for the trousseau.
When the betrotheds are ready and all the prepararions are done, they schedual the wedding date.
#I feel like my English is poor and weak. Please help me to sound more like a native speaker. Thanks alot.#
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The engagement period
There is no specific time for the
engagment period but it usually lasts one year.
After the engagment party the process of dating and getting to know each other begind. There are two official feasts(invite people to eat) held. First the groom's to be family invits the bride's to be family over lanch or dinner. Then the opposite happens; the bride's to be family invits the groom's to be family.
During this period the groom to be starts the house processing usually accompanied by the bride to be. They also buy (alshabka); it's part of the dawry and it's basically a set of gold or more ( or more than one set of gold).
The bride accompanied by her mother and sisters starts shopping for the trousseau.
When the betrotheds are ready and all the prepararions are done, they schedual the wedding date.
#I feel like my English is poor and weak. Please help me to sound more like a native speaker. Thanks alot.#
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