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自由的写作 - 我的周末
我的上次写得文章关于电影的评论,有点严肃,复杂的题目。这个文章我就打算形容我的周末,有点简单的题目。
这个周末我不是很忙。周六早上,我参加一个语言的交流,用Skype和威信。我的交流的伙伴帮我翻译一个文章,从威信朋友圈保存的。把这个文章我很有兴趣,可是不可以完全看得懂。虽然这个文章比较长,我打算慢慢翻译,可能需要几个星期还是几个月完全翻译。我也帮助我的伙伴解释一个英文的文章。以后,我复习生词,也花了半个小时复习汉子。以后,我出去吃了午饭,去逛街。晚上,我跟我的老婆完的游戏。
周天早上,我去公园跑步。公园里有一个走路的活动,非常多的人参加, 开始跑步没有问题,但是遇到他们以后,有点困难跑步,因为他们都堵住了路。下午又玩游戏,煮饭。现在开始吃饭,准备明天工作。周末总是过了太快!
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我不是潘金莲电影评论第四段
Unexpectedly, her former classmate returns and professes his love for her, asking her to settle down and marry him instead of pursuing her case. He informs her that his wife had passed away a year earlier. Li Xuelian refuses, but after he forces himself on her, she agrees to tour with him instead of pursuing her case. However, after overhearing one of his phone conversations, she discovers he had only courted her to gain advantage for his son’s career, by agreeing to the government to prevent her from going to Beijing. She leaves him and once again tries to go to Beijing, but is prevented along the way by official roadblocks. In the end, after hearing news of her ex-husbands death, she finally drops her case.
出乎意料的,她的老同学突然回来,承认他爱她。他问她和她结婚,要在一起过稳定的生活,不要继续追究上诉她的案子。他说一年之前,他的前妻去世了。李雪连拒绝,但是他的老同学不断苦苦追求她,然后,她终于同意放弃她的案子,陪她的老同学一起去旅游。然而,有一次,李雪连偶然听到他的老同学打电话跟别人讲话,就发现他只为了要进步他的儿子的职业追求她,帮助政府阻止她去北京。然后,她离开她的老同学,又要去北京继续上诉她的案子,但是被了政府的路障阻挠的。终于,她听到她的前夫去世以后,才放弃上诉.
谢谢所有的帮我改正的人!
5 de março de 2017
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Do I say "月底“ or "月低"?
I would like to say "at the end of the month". Do I say "月底" or "月低"? How do you use the two characters 底 and 低?
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我不是潘金莲电影评论第三段
Li Xuelian continues to bring her case to Beijing every year, at the time when the national conference is held. The movie fast forwards to ten years later, when all government officials are afraid of her and trying to persuade her not to go to Beijing for another year. She appears to have finally given up pleading her case and states that she is not planning to go to Beijing in the 11th year, but none of the government officials believes her. The county chief tries to get her to sign an agreement saying she will not go to Beijing, but she refuses, becoming so angry she changes her mind and decides to go anyway. The government sends four officials to her house to make sure she does not go to Beijing and case trouble, believing that their jobs depend on it.
每年,人民大会举行的时候,李雪连继续去北京向政府抗议。电影跳前去十年以后,所有的政府的官员怕李雪莲,想说服她不去北京抗议多一年。她好像终于已经放弃去,告诉他们她不打算去。可是,没有人相信她。县长问她签名一个合同,答应在未来不去。她拒绝,变生气,然后改变她不去的决定。政府送四个官员去她的家防止她去北京,因为他们认为他们的工作处于危险中。
17 de janeiro de 2017
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我不是潘金莲电影评论第二段
This is the second paragraph of my movie review. Appreciate all corrections, but as I am learning simple form Chinese characters, appreciate if corrections could be done using simplified characters. Thank you!
Instead of accepting this as any ordinary person would, Li Xuelian goes up the government hierarchy, complaining to increasingly higher levels of government. Along the way, through a miscommunication of official instructions, she gets locked up in jail for 2 weeks. Finally, she goes to Beijing to take her case to the National government congress. She gains access to the building where the congress is being held through a former classmate serving as head chef in the building where the congress is being held. She stops the car of the Provincial Governor and pleads her case. The governor makes her case an example to the congress, saying that such a small case should not have needed to have been brought to Beijing, sacking all the officials involved in the case. The governor emphasizes that government officials should have empathy for ordinary citizens and try to solve their problems at the grass roots level. This, despite the fact that the court’s original ruling on the case was correct!
正常的人应该接受法庭的决定,可是李雪连不接受。相反的,她继续对越来越高记政府的部门抱怨。期间,为了政府下令的误会,她被了政府送国监狱两个星期。终于,她去北京控诉人民打开会。因为她的同学在大会大楼当主厨师,她可以如今大会大楼。她让省长的车停了,对省长控诉。省长用了她的案件当一个例子,说这么小的案件不应该需要北京解决,然后所有的官员参与的这个案件被了她下岗。省长强调,政府的官员应该对老百姓有同性,应该要拼命解决他们的问题在基层。最有意思是,虽然本来的判决是对了,这个结果还可以发现!
11 de janeiro de 2017
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电影复习-我不是潘金连 Paragraph 1
Note this is the first of 11 paragraphs which I will progressively translate from my review written in English. I thought it would be too much for those correcting as well as myself to learn from the corrections if I waited until the whole review was translated and posted in one shot. Also understand there are character number restrictions on the website. Apologies also if some of the facts from the movie are not quite correct, as I have a terrible memory for these kinds of details.
I hope to use this movie to not only improve my Chinese vocabulary and grammar but to learn more about Chinese culture. I am aware there are a lot of themes in the movie relating to Chinese culture, some which I understand, some which I don't, but I hope I can learn more. I like this movie because it is the kind of movie where there are no black and white answers. It encourages reflection long after viewing and there is no "correct" viewpoint.
Movie Review – “I am not Pan Jin Lian”.
电影评论“我不是潘金连”。
Director: Feng Xiaogang
主任:冯小刚
Starring: Fan Bingbing
主演: 范冰冰
The storyline is simple enough – a woman, Li Xuelian, together with her husband, fake a divorce so they can obtain a second home in the city centre. After the divorce, she discovers her husband has married another woman and left her without a house. She then complains to the court to reverse the “fake” divorce, so she can get access to full divorce settlement benefits. However, the court upholds that the divorce was legitimate.
故事比较简单- 一个女人, 李雪连, 和她的老公,做了一个假的离婚, 因为他们要得到第二个房子在城市里。离婚之后,她才发现她的以前的以前的老公已经和别的女人结婚, 让她没有房子。以后,她对法庭抱怨,让法庭删掉本来给的离婚。这样,她可以得到一般家庭的资产。但是,法庭决定本来的离婚是正确。
21 de novembro de 2016
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