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Can someone check my essay ? :) Task: Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to to live in cities rather than in suburbs. Over the last century, an enormous problem with traffic have become more complicated that many big cities couldn't have found a good solution for it. If the heavy traffics had attracted attention of public institution of transport, they would have been reduced effectively. As we can observe, the standard living in metropolis has deteriorated as a result of increasing demand for cars which are blamed for traffic. Many people argue that traffics are caused by people living in a suburb or in the countryside who go by car to work in a city. This essay will look at the problem of traffic and give relevant solution for that. Firstly, people should have an opportunity to choose where they like to live and they shouldn't be forced to change their accommodation. The idea of encouraging people to live in a city in order to solve traffic jump, doesn't make sense. Furthermore, we should be more focused on finding answer what are the main reasons for traffic. In addition, there is a solid evidence that many cities are overwhelmed by cars and by pollution from them. Secondly, to solve the main problem of traffic the government should invest more money in public transport so that people can travel by buses, trains or metro. If all people , who live in suburb, came to city, the city might become overcrowded, overpopulated and there also might be less privacy. In addition, this would cause even more traffic because there might not be sufficient numbers of buses. To sum up, people should choose public means of transport at peak time so that they can save their time.

grammar If the heavy traffics had attracted attention of public institution of transport, they would have been reduced efectively