Could you help me correct my writing? Thank you very much! There are many people hold that the old and uneconomical buildings undoubtedly should make room for the modern skyscrapers. They think these ancient houses is more of a white elephant than a heritage of great value. Actually, what they value most is the maximum profit at lowest cost and of course, the high buildings would meet the requirement, for which it could accommodate people as much as possible. However, they do not realize that it is precisely the aesthetic value of these old buildings instead of cement houses that define what the Chinese cities are. It is no exaggeration to say that the elaborate, beautiful buildings and its intricately detailed ornamentation, vibrant tones, complex but harmonies colors sharp our national identity. Moreover, every time an ancient house is demolished, a part of our history is lost forever.

Could you help me correct my writing? Thank you very much! Dear Mr. Smith, I am a graduate majoring in Public Administration. The purpose of the letter is to apply for the position as a secretary. I believe I am quite fit for the post. Firstly, not only does my professional knowledge matches this vocation well, but also my English speaking is proficient enough to deal with the foreign receptions. Second, as a detail-oriented and patient person, I could easily accommodate myself to this job. Lastly, regular exercises and optimistic state of mind would help me manage work stress better. My resume is enclosed with the letter. It would be appreciated if you could grant me an interview.

Please help me revise my writing! Thanks a lot! Dear Bob, I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for giving my mobile phone back to me yesterday. We all know that the phone is increasingly important to us and things could be very bothersome if one loses his phone as there are a lot of privacy information saved in it. I am absolutely certain that I would have suffered losses if it were not for your kindness. How lucky I am! Words fail me when I want to appreciate your unselfish help. I believe it is precisely the virtuous heart like yours that makes the world a nicer place.

Please help me revise my writing! Thanks a lot! Dear Bob, I’m writing to express my sincere apology to you for my carelessness. Two weeks ago, you lent me the Bandari’s CD. However, it is not until I arrived in China that I found the CD in my luggage. Much to my regret, I was in such a hurry that I packed everything in my luggage without checking carefully. To make up for the mistake, I have sent the CD to you by EMS and attached “Pride and Prejudice”, as it is your favorite book. I hope this settlement will meet your wishes. Once again, please accept my heartfelt apology for the inconvenience I have caused.

Could you help me correct my writing? Thank you very much! Dear Professor Bruce, On behalf of all the students at this university who share a love for the English, I am writing to cordially invite you to be our honorable judge for the upcoming English speech contest. The aim of this contest is to inspire students to improve their oral proficiency and cultivate an interest in English. As your profound domain knowledge and exceptional teaching ability are widely recognized, we firmly believe that participants would benefit a lot from your guidance. The contest will be held at 7 pm on December 20th in Room 101 of Teaching Building A and is scheduled to run for 3 hours. Please inform us if you are able to attend this contest. We are looking forward to seeing you.

Could you help me correct my writing? Thank you very much! As is shown, a compelling penalty kick is going on. Pouring himself completely into the ball, the goalkeeper is considering a careful defensive strategy. Meanwhile, a perfect plan of attack is fermenting in the attacker’s mind. However, both of them are suddenly caught in self-doubt: the goalkeeper feels that keeping the huge net is far beyond his ability, while in the imagination of the attacker the goalkeeper is so strong that it is impossible to score. The purpose of the drawing is to illustrate that self-doubt cannot help any but damage the opportunity to success. Facing a challenge that we can never know its outcome, some people having insufficient confidence are more likely to overrate the difficulty and eventually less likely to approach it. In contrast, others who are sure of themselves would always have a clear picture of situations and then make a bold but deliberate plan to solve problems they may encounter. A case in point is that confident interviewee will have far higher priority to be appreciated than those who are too stressed to express themselves clearly during the interviews. Everyone is his own worst enemy. There have been too many cases where people are defeated by their fear of failure, even though they could have won an easy victory. Therefore, all of us should keep confidence when we come across various difficulties. Only in this way can we achieve the anticipated goal.

Could you help we correct my writing? Thank you very much! Dear Sir or Madam, As a teacher who wish every kid have the access to education, I am writing to request if you can recommend a recipient of my financial assistance as my contribution to Project Hope. To be specific, the candidate should be a dropout child from a remote and poverty-stricken area. What’s more, it would be better if the child could be a girl since girls tend to have less chance to go to school than boys in depressed regions. I will pay for her tuition fee and living expenses until she finishes school. If she has any other reasonable requirements, I will do my utmost to meet them. I appreciate your valuable attention and hope to hear from you soon.

Could you do me a favour and help me correct my writing? Thank you! To whom it may concern, As a book-loving student who often spend much time on reading, I am pretty obliged for the services and convenience you have offered. To contribute to further promote the service quality of the library, I would like to put up some suggestions. First and foremost, I think, computers and advanced technology ought to be introduced to the library to facilitate to retrieve information and borrow books. Additionally, it will be better if the library would provide some books recently published so that students could easily gain new knowledge and thoughts. Last but not least, adding more tables and chairs would allow more students to learn and read in the library. I will be much appreciated if you could find my proposals practical. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

Could you help revise my wirting? Thank you! What jumps to our sights is an interesting but thought-provoking cartoon. All has gone, the first person felt downhearted and said with a deep sign when he saw the water bottle fall down the ground. Facing the same situation the second man, in sharp contrast, smiled and showed no air of frustration. It is so fortunate that there is still a little water left, he said. Undoubtedly, the portrait illustrates vividly two totally different attitudes toward life predicament——passive or positive. It is inevitable that people will encounter various problems, however trivial or serious. All of us have two choices——either just standing there and crying , which is easy but meaningless, or cheering up and doing something about it. Of course, the second is the better one because the difficulty is there and the only way to stay from it is accept it and make efforts to solve it. Moreover, nothing is absolutely bad if we could view it from another perspective. In most cases, we are defeated by our negative thoughts rather than these troubles which we think are too hard to get rid of. In conclusion, it is of paramount significance of us to keep an optimistic attitude when we are confronted with diverse problems. As the old saying goes, every cloud has a silver lining. No matter how hard the condition is, only if we never lose faith can we eventually weather it.