About a lyric like a poem. Hello guys.

I'm trying to write a poetry lyric. But, I'm not sure if native English speakers get the meaning of sentences. I would like you to help me out to make it better and please let me know grammar errors or something difficult to understand. Before you fix my lyric, I'll explain about this lyric. You might see this lyric is about "stars in the sky", but it's also about "famous people called stars". The word "Town" is a metaphor of people.

Verse 1:

Watching the billions of stars

When the town gets to sleep

I remember hoping to shine like them on the sky

*repeat the same melody

Every time I step up the stairs,

I have stumbled and fallen

In that way, I have grown up to rise up high

*The rhymes are "stars" and "stairs", "sky" and "high"

Chorus:

I am taking off with my hope

To the world I haven’t seen.

*repeat the same melody

I am taking off with my all

Toward where the lights shine in

*The rhyme is "seen" and "shine in"

Verse 2:

Watching the star's flame goes out

When the town wiped all the rain

It might have been fighting with itself till the end

*repeat the same melody

One day, a new star comes out

It wakes the town up again

With forgetting the star that we have cried out

*The rhymes are "goes out" and "comes out", "rain" and "again"

Thank you.

Please help me out to write a lyric Hello guys. I am trying to write a lyric in English but, I might have some grammar errors and I am not sure if native English speakers get the meanings. Please let me know the errors or something difficult to understand. Before you fix my sentences, I let you know the meaning of this lyric. This lyric is expressing two meanings of stars. The one is "stars in the sky" and another one is "famous people called stars". Verse 1: When the town is in asleep, Watch’n billions of stars I remember hoping for shine-out like them to the sky Every time I step up the stairs, I have stumbled and stopped Having grown up to be the one in that way Chorus: I am taking off with my hope To the world I haven’t seen. I am taking off with my all Toward where the light shines on Verse 2: When the town is in the rain Watch’n the star burning out It might have been fighting with itself till the end One day, new star’s out It wakes the town up again With forgetting the one we have cried it out