i am working in the zoo Hello i'm Nuri. I have been working for 4 month in the zoo department of the Korean amusement park. My department worker is named "expedition leader". By the bus, we show visitors many animals and explain about them. We are also play a play. In script setting, amusment visitors are explorers and we're leader. We go on a expediton to finding legendary animals disapeared with vast treasure. In this way, we can explain the animal more fun. I love this job that give interesting animal information and pleasure to children. But now days, I have got a problem. There are many foreign visiter in our ride. In our job manual, if there are Koreans at least one person among the bus, we have to explain the animal in Korean. but all the people are foreigner, we can use other languages if we can. (the situation that all he people in the bus are foreigner, we call it "all-in") Right, this "all-in" brings me the trouble. I can't explain animals fluently in english. I want foreigner can understand what i tell and to notice their acting will be dangerous. Can you do me a favor? I want to do my best all people who ride my bus are happy. First, i want to know what I have to say to hold back foreigners dangerous action, and basic ride's information. Can you correct these lines a colloquial style?(and polite , in proper speak to a guest , and simple to guest can understand easliy.) 1. please sit two people on one seat (if one-seat one people, some one should be kicked out of the bus) 2. The more you seat in the back, you can get better sight to watch animals. 3. there are no windows in the bus, if you streched out your hand or you stuff it can be dangerous. 4. Don't stay in the hallway, if happend a sudden stop, it can be dangerous. 5. please keep sitting 6. Now we are going to feeding giraffe Do not touch a giraffe and Do not scream please. You can suprise a giraffe that we have to stop feeding 7. turn off the flash please I want to make a new intersting expedition script in english with you guys. i think i can also tell you interesting stories about my job. Please help me complete these script. and if you can, can you correct this all letter too? it can be so long ... cause I'm talkactive person. if you correcting only above 7 sentance, it also sooooooooooo thanxful. thanks!