A attractive women When her appear in front of you, envy must appear in your mind，why have such excellent woman around me, she can drive the car and speaks fluent english, and also very beautiful and clever,and so on , I think it‘s seem like a goddess in all men’s heart, the sentence is right：woman must increase the knowledge though learning, even though one day you older but you also very attractive .i think she is that people.

A shock thing ——car accident I heared a shock thing about my friend yesterday,it is unbelievable for everbody.A car accident happened around me about my friend tim. it’s happened afternoon of March 10 2011.my friend rideed the bicycle want to across the road，Suddenly a car in front of him，He lie on the ground，ten metres away from his car，if you arestay in that situation，you must think he cann't escape is misfortune，but miracle appear，thanks the god，thanks you save him. Tim was only a minor injuries，only need recuperate a few days.i hope he recovery health as quickly as possible

A car accident I heared a shock thing about my friend yesterday,it is unbelievable for everbody.A car accident happened around me about my friend tim.

please help me modify thanks My name is Xiao Fang and twenty-three years old ,and have graduated two years ,my major in business management in university ,I am working in environment protection company, perhaps you will be ask me “why are you ready to leave this company” ,I will give you a appropriate answer .I think every people have a life goal and want to live better than other people who your friends or classmates, I am no exception .Every people know neither a free lunch nor free pies ,only ability and more hard work than other people. So I chose to leave to fine a new development direction or new working environment ,because the company I am working now cann ’t give me that I want to get. If I can be working in your company ,I will hard work and hard study new knowledge With the fastest speed into the new job Perhaps I am not the best appropriate for this job,but I will hard study make myself for this job as soon as possible.thanks please help me modify

Long time no see my friend I am sorry to my friend， long time you not see my notebooks ，i want to write it everyday ,but i don't know what i can to write. The new year is near to me ,i will be enjoying my vaction a few days later,I wish all my friend have a nice new years, everything will be fine,no matter work\loving\body or so on. this is my sincerely wish

Merry Christmas Merry Christmas to my all friend，Two day later is Christmas Day，I will be going to sing with many friend，It is expected for everyone。 So I must make a schedule of that day ，we will be going at12:30pm，1:00 pm getting there，we spend thee hours singing，After then having a dinner and shopping. That must be a nice day

A bad things The bad thing happened Saturday，I broken the laptop of my brother，I apology to my brother ，and very sadness about this thing，why I am careless when to do everything，I am always make mistake，I can’t forgive myself，，I am unhappy and no spirit to do everything now。It

Tomorrow is Saturday，next week is Christmas day Tomorrow is fine day，not very cold，It is comfortable when we are going out ,I’m discussing with my friends where we will be going tomorrow，we have three choice ，including，going to Qibao old street，Zhongshan park or Paris spring shopping plaza. We not decide where we will going , I need to buy clothes ，but not this Saturday，many shop will be discount in the next week that’s Christmas day. I think it ‘s a good opportunity for us who have not many money or earn money ,we can buy high quality goods only use a little money， It’s nice holiday，accident have one day vacation at that day，but we don’t have，but I hope the Christmas older people can give me a present ，thank you. Have a nice holiday for everyone.

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