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My Dream
My dream is to develop my own game. I really want to make my own games, so I have a plan to make a game until this year. Maybe it'll be a hard time, but I love to make games.
Now I have been working as a software engineer at a medical software company.
I had worked as a programmer at game software company. Now passed about 6 years, I will restart my dream. It's time to move into my dream, it will come true.
Anyway I couldn't sleep well yesterday because I thought about my dream, job and future. After all, I decided to make better life for dream.
If I will be able to release my game, I will tell all you guys.
Have a great days.
19 มิ.ย. 2013 เวลา 6:34
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My Dream
My dream is to develop my own game software. I really want to make one, so I planed to create a game software until this year. Maybe it'll be hard but, I will love to make games.
Now I have been working as a software engineer at a medical software company.
I work as a programmer at game software company for 6 years, I think its time to start my dream and to move forward it so that it will come true.
Anyway I couldn't sleep well yesterday because I thought about my dream, job and future. After all, I decided to make better life for dream.
If I will be able to release my own game software, I will tell all you guys.
Have a great days.
=) just be careful with your verb tenses and redundancy of words,,=) so far good job!
20 มิถุนายน 2013
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