Hi! Can you check a piece of my essay, please? I also have several questions that I indicated using a slash or brackets. It's valuable to me to know the native speakers' opinion. Thanks in advance:)
Nowadays there are a lot of services for every spare of daily life. Most often surveyed residents use such services as having their haircut or having their clothes dry-cleaned. The option “having your car serviced” is more frequently cited than the option “having your home redecorated”.
It is not surprising as if a car is not repaired in time it will/can (?) lead to car accident. Thus, for people taking care of a (their?) car is more important than redecorating a house that can be done only every few years.
Regrettably, one problem that can arise with choosing a service company is that people can be baffled by making a choice due to having various options. I think the best solution to this problem is to check reviews (feedback? reviews or/and feedback?) on such companies in order to find the most suitable one/for a person.
in conclusion I am deeply convinced that it is essential to use professional help for having something done as specialists are more qualified and experienced. Besides, they have special equipment and supplies.