Please,Can a native English speaker tell me which of the following paragraphs is more grammatically correct? thank you.🌹
only the bravest soldiers in America were qualified to be buried here, and their souls turned into little hummingbirds to guard this land and wait for the return of their masters......
only the bravest warriors in America were qualified to rest here. Their souls turned into little hummingbirds, guarding this land and waiting for the return of their master...