Hi Loli! Your writing is SO good! I understood it 100%. Here are the corrections written out: “We always notice that our English teacher, Jood, working hard…” ❌ Missing verb form → should be “is working hard” or “works hard”. “…and truly cared that we understand the lesson” ❌ Tense mismatch (cared is past, understand is present). ✅ Better: “and truly cares that we understand the lesson.” “She always diversifies classroom activitie” ❌ Wrong plural → activities not activitie. ✅ Correct: “She always diversifies classroom activities.” “which makes the lessons more fun for us.” ✅ Correct, just needs smoother punctuation. “We really appreciate that and love her teaching style🩷” ✅ Fine, but “that” is vague → better: “We really appreciate her effort and love her teaching style.” ✅ Corrected Version We always notice that our English teacher, Jood, works hard and truly cares that we understand the lesson. She always diversifies classroom activities, which makes the lessons more fun for us. We really appreciate her effort and love her teaching style 🩷.