Akram Alwajih
I am writing to apply for position accounter in your institutional. With 10 years of experiences in this area and Great records of Financial management operations , I am confident in my abilities will contribute in Your team. In my previous role as financial analyst at Yemen company , I have implemented successfully measures to save cost and simplified financial Process of report Generation . I am adept at financial data analysis, identify a tend and provide strategic recommendations to drive business growth . I will be appreciated for opportunity to discuss how my skills and experiences align with your institutional's objectives. Thank you for consideration my application "
4 Oca 2024 17:01
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I am writing to apply for position accounter in your institutional. With 10 years of experiences in this area and Great records of Financial management operations , I am confident in my abilities will contribute in Your team. In my previous role as financial analyst at Yemen company , I have implemented successfully measures to save cost and simplified financial Process of report Generation . I am adept at financial data analysis, identify a tend and provide strategic recommendations to drive business growth . I will be appreciated for opportunity to discuss how my skills and experiences align with your institutional's objectives. Thank you for consideration my application "In my previous role as a financial analyst at a Yemen company , I successfully implemented measures to save cost and simplified Generating financial reports. I am adept at analysing financial data, identifying trends and provide strategic recommendations to drive business growth . I will appreciate you to give me the opportunity to discuss how my skills and experience align with your institutional objectives. Thank you for considering my application. Sincerenly, Akram Alwajih
4 Ocak 2024
I am writing to apply for a position as accountant(?) in your organization (or company). With already 10 years of experience in this area and [Great records of Financial management operations - not sure what you mean by this (Great records...)], I believe that that my skills could prove to be of value to your team. In my previous role as financial analyst at a Yemeni [the adjective is "Yemeni"] company, I successfully implemented cost saving measures and simplified the process of generating financial reports . I am adept at delivering financial data analyses, trend identifications, and strategic recommendations aimed at furthering business growth . I would very much appreciate an opportunity to discuss how my skills and experiences might align with your objectives. I thank you for your consideration.
I think it is better to soften your confidence a bit. That is why I use terms like "believe", "could prove", "might align". Personally, I find too much confidence to suggest a lack of humility: "I am confident in my abilities", etc. A little of that is fine, but you also need to permit them to make such judgements themselves rather than making them yourself.
6 Ocak 2024
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