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hua
Hi! Yesterday, I cleaned my room. My room was so messy, so my mother always told me that I should clean my room.
My room is clean now, so I feel very refreshed.
19 May 2023 03:50
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Hi! Yesterday, I cleaned my room. My room was so messy, so my mother always told
me that I should clean my room. My room is clean now, so I feel very refreshed.
To me the key point is to keep coherence in your sentence… what about this paragraph?
I cleaned my room yesterday because it was messy. My mom always say that I should keep my room clean. Then, it is clean! and I feel satisfied.
Tip: by saying that you are refreshed means that your strength is restored. Clearly, you are restored when you rest, wash yourself but not your room
Hope it works!
19 Mayıs 2023
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hua
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Çince (Mandarin), İngilizce, Japonca, Korece
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