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Task 2: Some companies sponsor sport and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion Here is my outline: " benefits: By sponsoring athletes,companies can increase their visibility and recognition among the media and fans This is mainly because their names and logos s can be displayed on the sportspeople’ s clothing ,equipment and vehicles .Therefore, they can reach a wider customer base who may not be aware of their existences Having sponsorships from companies , sport leagues can run smoothly and attract more spectators and audience. For example, money from sponsors allowed World Cup organizers to develop the facilities, cover national football teams’ cost of accommodation and travel and launch many marketing campaigns. As a result, the league could go well and receive much attention from people across the globe drawbacks: Sponsoring famous athletes can create inequality among sportspeople.With more sponsorships , the famous ones may gain access to better training facilities and equipment that might enhance their performance. However, it also means that the lesser-known ones might have less access to these resources and then struggle to improve their skills. Companies’ reputation is also diminished if they fund sports leagues that have many scandals. For instance, if a company sponsors a league that has been accused of match-fixing or cheating, it may lose trust and respect of its customers and its partners who may question whether it gets involved in these scandals or not " Hope to receive your feedback about my outline.
26 Tem 2023 16:52
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Task 2: Some companies sponsor sport and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion Here is my outline: " benefits: By sponsoring athletes,companies can increase their visibility and recognition among the media and fans This is mainly because their names and logos s can be displayed on the sportspeople’ s clothing ,equipment and vehicles .Therefore, they can reach a wider customer base who may not be aware of their existences Having sponsorships from companies , sport leagues can run smoothly and attract more spectators and audience. For example, money from sponsors allowed World Cup organizers to develop the facilities, cover national football teams’ cost of accommodation and travel and launch many marketing campaigns. As a result, the league could go well and receive much attention from people across the globe drawbacks: Sponsoring famous athletes can create inequality among sportspeople.With more sponsorships , the famous ones may gain access to better training facilities and equipment that might enhance their performance. However, it also means that the lesser-known ones might have less access to these resources and then struggle to improve their skills. Companies’ reputation is also diminished if they fund sports leagues that have many scandals. For instance, if a company sponsors a league that has been accused of match-fixing or cheating, it may lose trust and respect of its customers and its partners who may question whether it gets involved in these scandals or not " Hope to receive your feedback about my outline.
It’s ok. I am not sure whether the question wants you to concentrate on the advantages and disadvantages for the companies themselves or wider issues, like your example of inequality. I don’t think this is an actual IELTS question, the wording doesn’t seem like it.
26 Temmuz 2023
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