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Michelle
I’ve just finished watching “The Volcano” on Netflix and it’s just astonishing from the perspective of natural disasters. While I was watching this heartbreaking documentary, it came into my mind the tragedy from the World Trade Center. I’m still wondering why the tourists who chose going to the island didn’t ask about the estimated period eruption. The first eruption was in 2013, the next one was in 2016. Therefore, statistically speaking, the next estimated eruption was claimed to be in 2019, the year when the tragedy happened. Definetly, I wouldn’t have gone there for any reason. On the other hand, my husdband told me he would have explored the island no matter what.
19 Ara 2022 14:18
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I’ve just finished watching “The Volcano” on Netflix and it’s just astonishing from the perspective of natural disasters. While I was watching this heartbreaking documentary, the tragedy of the World Trade Center came to mind. I’m still wondering why the tourists who chose going to the island didn’t ask about the estimated period eruption. The first eruption was in 2013, the next one was in 2016. Therefore, statistically speaking, the next estimated eruption was claimed to be in 2019, the year when the tragedy happened. I definitely wouldn’t have gone there for any reason. On the other hand, my husdband told me he would have explored the island no matter what.
Good job ! I just switched some words around to sound more natural:)
20 Aralık 2022
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