different between "to derived" and " in driving" in these
1. Their commitment to excellence and collaboration has been instrumental in driving the project forward.
2.Their commitment in sparkling and collaboration was effectiveness to derived the project forward

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Question

different between  "to derived" and " in driving"  in these
1. Their commitment to excellence and collaboration has been instrumental in driving the project forward. 
2.Their commitment in sparkling and collaboration was effectiveness to derived the project forward

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Answer

Sentence 1. is good
Sentence 2. has a lot of problems:

SPARKING not SPARKLING. EFFECTIVE, not EFFECTIVENESS (you need an adjective, not noun), DRIVE not DERIVE,      Also, the tenses and construction using TO DRIVE are problematic. So, just use the structure of sentence 1.

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