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This week was happy for me because I changed my hair color, and my friends praised me. I dyed my hair on Sunday. I changed it from blonde to red brown. I saw my dark hair color after a long time. But the hairdresser made me look pretty. I love my hair color now. I liked me when I was blonde, but it prettier now. Since the day, I want to new clothes because I thought I want to more pretty girl! I usually buy clothes at a cheap store. Actually, I want to get branded one. But I don’t have enough money… But it will come Christmas and the end of year. Perhaps I can get Christmas gifts from my parents. And it’ll come my birthday too! I will turning 20, so I believe I can get a present. In Japan, on every New Year’s Day, children can get New Year’s gift of money. I can get this gift maybe… I will buy new clothes using I received money. And I want to try nails. I often use nail clips, but I never do nails. I watch very pretty and beautiful nails’ videos recently. I want to be like K-pop idol, and I want more and more money!!!
11 Ara 2025 14:18
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This week was good because I changed my hair color, and my friends complimented me. I dyed my hair on Sunday. I changed it from blonde to reddish brown. My hair was suddenly dark for the first time in a long time. The hairdresser made me look pretty. I love my hair color now. I liked it when I was blonde, but it looks prettier now. Since that day, I want to buy new clothes, because I want to be prettier! I usually buy clothes at a cheap store. I actually want to get branded ones, but I don’t have enough money… It will be Christmas soon and the end of year. Perhaps I can get Christmas gifts from my parents. And it’ll be my birthday, too! I will be turning 20, so I believe I can get a present. In Japan, on New Year’s Day, children can get New Year’s money. I can get this gift maybe… I will buy new clothes using money I receive. I also want to try doing my nails. I often use press-on nails, but I never actually paint my nails. I've been watching very beautiful nail art videos recently. I want to be like a K-pop idol, and I want more and more money!!!
Great writing! I changed a few things. I hope you get what you're hoping for! Happy holidays!
12 Aralık 2025
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