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Heatstroke is a very scary illness because it can happen quickly to anyone. When your body gets too hot, you can feel dizzy, sick, and weak. In severe cases, it damages your brain, heart, and other internal organs. It can even cause death if you do not get help. Please drink water and stay safe.
13 Tem 2026 23:51
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Heatstroke is a very serious condition because it can happen quickly to anyone. When your body becomes too hot, you may feel dizzy, sick, and weak. In severe cases, it can damage your brain, heart, and other internal organs. It can even be fatal if you do not receive treatment. Please drink plenty of water and stay safe.
Level: C1.
Your writing is clear, informative, and well structured. You explain the risks of heatstroke effectively and use appropriate vocabulary for a health-related topic. To improve further, continue developing your use of formal expressions and precise vocabulary. Excellent work! 😊
14 Tem 2026 10:14
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