I have a part-time job starting this afternoon. It’s incredibly hot in Japan again today. Lately, as I’ve been writing this, I’ve been thinking about something. All I’ve been doing is working part-time. I’m spending way too much of my free time on my part-time job. I truly feel that I need to have more new experiences. This summer, I plan to do lots of things that will be good experiences for me. First, I’m going on a solo trip.
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I have a part-time job starting this afternoon. It’s incredibly hot in Japan again today. Lately, while writing these posts, I’ve been thinking about something. It feels like all I’ve been doing is working at my part-time job. I’m spending far too much of my free time there. I truly feel that I need to have more new experiences. This summer, I plan to do lots of things that will broaden my horizons. First, I’m going on a solo trip.
Level: C1.
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